I really enjoyed reading, The Game Pages. It’s full of emotion and a different take on the idea of sports and kids who grow up in the slums. Right off the bat though I’m slightly confused about the placing of, ‘Sports…"
"Who's Mira? I thought Liam took Drew to meet Mira at the tavern?
Loved the description of Mira's eyes, "...a brilliant green, the color of spring grass." Just the little details help paint the picture.
There's an extra…"
Hi Temoca ~ Just wanted to say thank you for the great comments you made on my writing today. I appreciate the time you took to read over my piece. I can't wait to hear the next part of your story. You are a very talented writer who evokes a lot of emotion in your readers. ~Debbie