I know you were trying to thing of a title for Wylde2. I’m reading a great book and I just came across, How to Make a Great Title. You probably already know about how to make a great title but to get your juices flowing this is…"
I really enjoyed reading, The Game Pages. It’s full of emotion and a different take on the idea of sports and kids who grow up in the slums. Right off the bat though I’m slightly confused about the placing of, ‘Sports…"
You have some great visuals going on that are really creative,
Her head turns slowly around like some freaky owl. Penetrating pellet eyes fix on my face before she turns away from me.
instead of the smooth cinnamon color it usually…"
Your first page starts out really good because you start with action. I'm slightly confused about who you are trying to establish as a main character. I can really see everything very vivid and your characters are interacting well, I…"