"Thanks! I know you're going to the retreat this weekend and I'm submitting my application on the 25th so maybe, if you're up to it, you can either call me (827.4735) or reply electronically with your input. Thanks again."
"Hey Moira! Here are my comments:
Don't Peek --
Your first line is that her search is making a mess, but then you show her just looking at places that wouldn't really make a mess at all. If you want her to leave a trail behind her,…"
Hey gang,Any feedback yet on the stuff I sent out? This Sunday the 16th is scheduled for writing but if you have comments for me, please bring them then. I don't plan on being there on the 23rd and I'll be sending in my application for the mentor program on the 25th. Thanks for the help,Moira See More