I did it...I got it to work...anyway, here is my critique for you.
First, I would love to read the other chapters leading up to this point...get me up to speed. As you know I am in LOVE with this concept and can't wait to see what…"
"One last thing Andie, (like there should be more...) on the blank sheets in between, realize that you may need to write entire chapters to fill the gap. If that happens create a seperate sticky note for each with a summary, telling you what to do,…"
First off, I love the "moving deck chairs on the Titanic while neglecting to steer around major iceberg problems" thing...it about sums it up sometimes everything in life sometimes. Sometimes the deck chairs are all you can…"